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托福写作第2题，也就是我们常说的“学术讨论写作”，要求考生们在模拟的学术讨论中，通过回应教授的提问来参与讨论。这道题的范围是在大学课程中遇到的问题或主题。

这道题要求你的作文需要清晰、有条理，并且能够表达你对这个话题的看法或分享你的想法。你有10分钟的时间来阅读题目+写作文，字数要求是100+字，但托你的福建议字数达到150字左右。写作的关键是要提供一个逻辑性强的论证或解释，并使用相关的例子来支持你的观点。

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托福发布了详细的学术讨论写作评分标准。打分从0到5分，我们可以发现，即使是满分，也允许有小错误；而一旦套题，就算内容写的再好，也都是0分。

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每个分数的解释说明：

5分：A Fully Successful Response

- 你对在线讨论的贡献非常相关且表达清晰。

- 你的写作包括详尽的解释、例子和细节。

- 你有效地使用了多种句子结构和精确、地道的词汇选择。

- 除了在计时条件下常见的小错或常见错误外，几乎没有词汇或语法错误。

4分：A Generally Successful Response

- 你的写作相关且易于理解。

- 你提供了充分的解释、例子和细节。

- 你展示了多种句子结构和适当的词汇选择。

- 词汇或语法错误很少。

3分：A Partially Successful Response

- 你的写作大体相关且易于理解。

- 你提供了解释和例子，但有些部分可能不清晰、不完整或不相关。

- 句子结构和词汇有一定的变化，但可能会出现明显的错误。

2分：A Mostly Unsuccessful Response

- 你的写作试图为讨论做出贡献，但由于语言限制，可能难以理解。

- 想法可能没有充分展开或只有部分相关。

- 你使用了有限的句子结构和词汇，语言使用中有许多错误。

1分：An Unsuccessful Response

- 你的写作显示出无效的尝试来应对题目，几乎没有或没有连贯的想法。

- 句子结构和词汇的范围严重有限。

- 严重且频繁的语言错误使得你的想法难以理解。

- 你的大部分内容可能是从题目中复制的，或只包含最少的原创语言。

0分：No Valid Response

- 你的写作是空白的、不是英文的、完全从题目中复制的，或与题目无关。

以下是官方标准中对5~0分的范文。注意，官方标准总是比实际评分的要求低。建议考生仅作参考。

👉5.0分（满分）: A Fully Successful Response

题目（简化版）: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? “University students should be required to take courses outside their major.”

回答:I strongly agree that university students should be required to take courses outside their major. Such courses offer a broader educational experience, which can be beneficial in multiple ways. First, exposure to different disciplines enhances critical thinking skills by encouraging students to see problems from diverse perspectives. For instance, a science major who takes a philosophy course may develop better analytical skills by learning how to construct arguments. Second, taking courses in other fields can help students discover new interests or career paths they hadn’t previously considered. For example, a student majoring in engineering might take a business class and become interested in entrepreneurship, which could lead to a more fulfilling career. Overall, requiring students to take courses outside their major fosters a more well-rounded education, which is crucial for personal and professional growth.

评语：

- 内容：回答与题目高度相关，清晰地回应了问题。它提供了详尽的解释和具体的例子。

- 语言运用：语言准确且地道，有效地使用了多样的句子结构。

- 错误：没有明显的错误，显示出对语法和词汇的强控制力。

- 总体：这个回答满足了5分的所有标准，因为它清晰、相关且发展良好。

👉4.0:分 A Generally Successful Response

题目（简化版）: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? “University students should be required to take courses outside their major.”

回答: I think university students should take some courses outside their major because it can be beneficial. Taking different courses helps students to gain knowledge in other areas, which can be useful in the future. For example, a computer science student might benefit from taking a communication class because good communication skills are important in any job. Also, students may find new interests by studying something different from their major. However, it is important that students do not get overwhelmed with too many extra courses, as they need to focus on their major. In conclusion, while it’s important to take courses outside the major, there should be a balance so that students can manage their workload.

评语：

- 内容：回答与题目相关，并且提供了适当的解释和例子。

- 语言运用：回答使用了多样的句子结构和恰当的词汇选择，但缺乏5分水平回答的精确度和成熟度。

- 错误：存在一些小错误和稍微不够精细的语言使用，但这些并不妨碍理解。

- 总体：这个回答满足了4分的标准，因为它总体上组织良好且相关，但比5分水平的回答稍欠打磨。

👉3.0分: A Partially Successful Response

题目（简化版）:Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? “University students should be required to take courses outside their major.”

回答: I agree that students should take courses outside their major. It is important because it gives them more knowledge. If a student takes different courses, they can learn new things. For example, a student who studies engineering can take an art class and learn how to be creative. Also, students might find out that they like another subject. But sometimes it can be hard to take many courses, and students might not have enough time for their major. In conclusion, taking other courses is good but can also be challenging.

点评：

- 内容：回答大体上与题目相关，但缺乏详细的阐述，并且包含了一些模糊的点。

- 语言运用：句子结构和词汇有一定的变化，但与更高级别的回答相比有所限制。

- 错误：存在明显的词汇和语法错误，一些想法没有得到充分发展。

- 总体：这个回答满足了3分的标准，因为它虽然相关，但细节不足，并且显示出更多的语言限制。

👉2.0分: A Mostly Unsuccessful Response

题目（简化版）: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? “University students should be required to take courses outside their major.”

回答: I think that taking courses outside major is good. Students can learn new things. For example, taking a business class can be helpful. But it can also be hard because students need to study a lot. They need to focus on their major, and extra courses can make it hard. In conclusion, I think it can be good but also hard.

点评：

- Content: The response attempts to address the prompt but lacks depth and clarity. The ideas are vague and underdeveloped.

- Language Use: The response has a limited range of sentence structures and vocabulary, with repetitive phrases.

- Errors: There are numerous errors in sentence structure and word choice that affect the clarity of the response.

- Overall: This response meets the criteria for a score of 2, as it is mostly relevant but poorly elaborated and difficult to follow.

👉1.0: An Unsuccessful Response

题目（简化版）:Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? “University students should be required to take courses outside their major.”

回答:Taking courses outside the major is sometimes good. Students should do it. But it is not always good. Because too many courses. This is a problem. So, I think it’s good but not good. Students study a lot. Many courses.

点评:

- 内容：回答大多数情况下不连贯，未能清晰地回应题目。它缺乏任何有意义的阐述或相关的例子。

- 语言运用：回答显示出极其有限的句子结构和词汇范围。它非常重复且不清晰。

- 错误：频繁且严重的语法错误妨碍了理解，回答缺乏连贯性。

- 总体：这个回答满足了1分的标准，因为它反映出在讨论中做出贡献的无效尝试，且连贯内容极少。

👉Score 0: No Valid Response

题目（简化版）: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? “University students should be required to take courses outside their major.”

回答: Yes, I agree. Students study. Courses are good. The university is important. I like courses. It is nice. I do not understand. Study many things.

点评：

- 内容：回答与题目完全脱节，没有任何连贯的想法或与题目相关的内容。

- 语言运用：语言大多是照抄的短语，缺乏任何原创思想。

- 错误：几乎没有连贯的想法，回答毫无意义。

- 总体：这个回答0分，因为它未能为讨论贡献任何有意义或相关的内容。

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